WWW: This is a really quirky, original and inspired take on the HSBC ad! You have used the branding well to retain the professional look.
EBI: The photo looks stretched and I think the writing would look even more professional in one colour.
LR: Attention to detail is everything in media studies, therefore I would like you to produce a second draft that does not stretch the image and that uses one colour for the font (maybe white?) then comment on whether this improves the advert and why.
WWW: This is a really quirky, original and inspired take on the HSBC ad! You have used the branding well to retain the professional look.
ReplyDeleteEBI: The photo looks stretched and I think the writing would look even more professional in one colour.
LR: Attention to detail is everything in media studies, therefore I would like you to produce a second draft that does not stretch the image and that uses one colour for the font (maybe white?) then comment on whether this improves the advert and why.
this improves the advert because as you said it would look more professional
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